by Preston Bell
BLING! BLING! "oh the alarm clock"SPLAP! i hit the alarms clock as hard as i could.I what to enderdouce myself to you before i begin this storie that hapended in the sumer of 2010 now its 2011. My name is Jake Im 12 years old i live in Michigan grand rapids to be exact.now to the storie.1 year ago i was going to go on a camp out with my two friends Eric and Mattew. Erics dad came with us to the woods for our camp out.One thing about me and my friends we love having airsoft wars. and we thought it would be fun to have and airsoft war in the woods.so i brought a can of 5,000 bebes and i brought my m16 and my pistol.Eric brought his shot gun and a mini uzi. Mathew brought his mp 40 a guns used in world war 2 and his desert eagle.but we brought them thinking we world have and airsoft war with eachorther but we were wrong.so well we were in the car i saw a bunch of cool stuff Erics brother was going too only he went to a different camp out with 4 of his friends there 16 so they brought painball guns.
Erics brother and his friends all got out of the car we stayed in we were in the cars for like five more minutes then we stoped and got out we were only going to be ther for 5 days but we took a detour.so when we got out are stuff we brought 2 tents and and hole lot more.Erics dad said he was going to go fishing. we hate fishing so we sayed and set up stuff.wow its Eenn an hour and
Erics dad hasent came back we got scared so i grabed my pistol and Eric grabed his mini uzi and mattew brought his desert eagle (a pistol). we went looking for him we couldent find him.eventally we found a lake and i saw his fishing pole on the dock.we were sacred as crape we terned around and there was erics dad dead.OMG! i grabed my cell phone in one mothon and called nine one one but i rememberd im in the fricken wilderness theres no signal there.but just then the scarest thiing poped out it was a mix from a lizard and wolzeren i grabed my pistol and shot the beast it fell dead i screamed at the top of my loungs"comon this way!"we ran back to camp i grabed my m 16 Eric grabed his shotey mathew grabed his mp40 and we all loaded up.i turned aroud and saw a beast jump on me he knoched my pistol out of my hand i took out a pocket knife and stabed it it fell to the ground i looked to see Eric with my m16 and his mini uzi one in each hand "eat this" he screamed.i ran out of are camp site and i rememberd i forgot my guns i ran back picked my back pack put in my can of bebes and i put in a few snack foods zipped it up and ran my hart out.but then i said whait wheres my friends i yelled "Mathew Eric!"then i whaited 5 seconds then i heard "i coud use some help"i followed the voice tell i saw Mathew pwning i got in the fight too.i shot one kicked one then shot it in the air then i tossed Mathew my pocket knife he cought it stabed a beast tossed it back at that exact time a beast jumped on me i stabed that and then i shot a bunch i yelled "weres eric"mathew said they got splet up "oh nice to know he have to find him" i said. then i looked and saw him geting chased i picked off like 7 with my m16 Mathew did the same erci out of breath said my shotteys almost out i tossed him my can of bebes we all filed up will we were running i got attacked and i droped my m16 i shot the one with my pistol i said "whait i got to grab my m16" eric said "no we have to keep going"then i said "ok 90$ bucks gone to whaist"eric replied ill buy you one when we get back if we well"he kept running tell we saw erics dads car it got attacked we whaited for a ride he finnaly saw a car drive by they rulled down there window and said "what the crape are you doing here" "we said comon lets go"and we rode away
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camp out
by Preston BellBLING! BLING! "oh the alarm clock"SPLAP! i hit the alarms clock as hard as i could.I what to enderdouce myself to you before i begin this storie that hapended in the sumer of 2010 now its 2011. My name is Jake Im 12 years old i live in Michigan grand rapids to be exact.now to the storie.1 year ago i was going to go on a camp out with my two friends Eric and Mattew. Erics dad came with us to the woods for our camp out.One thing about me and my friends we love having airsoft wars. and we thought it would be fun to have and airsoft war in the woods.so i brought a can of 5,000 bebes and i brought my m16 and my pistol.Eric brought his shot gun and a mini uzi. Mathew brought his mp 40 a guns used in world war 2 and his desert eagle.but we brought them thinking we world have and airsoft war with eachorther but we were wrong.so well we were in the car i saw a bunch of cool stuff Erics brother was going too only he went to a different camp out with 4 of his friends there 16 so they brought painball guns.
Erics brother and his friends all got out of the car we stayed in we were in the cars for like five more minutes then we stoped and got out we were only going to be ther for 5 days but we took a detour.so when we got out are stuff we brought 2 tents and and hole lot more.Erics dad said he was going to go fishing. we hate fishing so we sayed and set up stuff.wow its Eenn an hour and
Erics dad hasent came back we got scared so i grabed my pistol and Eric grabed his mini uzi and mattew brought his desert eagle (a pistol). we went looking for him we couldent find him.eventally we found a lake and i saw his fishing pole on the dock.we were sacred as crape we terned around and there was erics dad dead.OMG! i grabed my cell phone in one mothon and called nine one one but i rememberd im in the fricken wilderness theres no signal there.but just then the scarest thiing poped out it was a mix from a lizard and wolzeren i grabed my pistol and shot the beast it fell dead i screamed at the top of my loungs"comon this way!"we ran back to camp i grabed my m 16 Eric grabed his shotey mathew grabed his mp40 and we all loaded up.i turned aroud and saw a beast jump on me he knoched my pistol out of my hand i took out a pocket knife and stabed it it fell to the ground i looked to see Eric with my m16 and his mini uzi one in each hand "eat this" he screamed.i ran out of are camp site and i rememberd i forgot my guns i ran back picked my back pack put in my can of bebes and i put in a few snack foods zipped it up and ran my hart out.but then i said whait wheres my friends i yelled "Mathew Eric!"then i whaited 5 seconds then i heard "i coud use some help"i followed the voice tell i saw Mathew pwning i got in the fight too.i shot one kicked one then shot it in the air then i tossed Mathew my pocket knife he cought it stabed a beast tossed it back at that exact time a beast jumped on me i stabed that and then i shot a bunch i yelled "weres eric"mathew said they got splet up "oh nice to know he have to find him" i said. then i looked and saw him geting chased i picked off like 7 with my m16 Mathew did the same erci out of breath said my shotteys almost out i tossed him my can of bebes we all filed up will we were running i got attacked and i droped my m16 i shot the one with my pistol i said "whait i got to grab my m16" eric said "no we have to keep going"then i said "ok 90$ bucks gone to whaist"eric replied ill buy you one when we get back if we well"he kept running tell we saw erics dads car it got attacked we whaited for a ride he finnaly saw a car drive by they rulled down there window and said "what the crape are you doing here" "we said comon lets go"and we rode away
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so what do you think i am